Insomnia ~Awarded by Sasha~
I lie Awake Listening You lie Awake Wondering We lie Awake Because Our lives Have become This lie ~ Congratulations on this most deserved Award, dear Donnayou have embraced the art of...
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No advise on this one...or even comment...just to say this one goes deep..a feeling I well know...
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Wow... This one goes deep... All great pieces do:) Great Write!
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Insomnia....... interesting take on such a condition, like your opening line very much 'I lie' 'we lie' might have had more impact............ loved it ;-) BG
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Sax, I like that food for thought.... how 'bout this I. You. We. Lie. ??
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Donna......... I like that, almost a piece in itself...... personally (and you did ask ;-)) there is a really good 'short' in what you have started....... nice to see you in this little corner. BG
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Donna......... I do hope you return to this piece ;-) BG
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i agree with those who noticed how this one has depth. whoa, i have nothing more to say eh he he.
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You go right ahead, I'm going to sleep.......................
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~ this is a fantastic example of minimalist poetry, dear Donnait's in the format you've used....and that really brings this one homethis poem reaches deep and knowing heart places...love what you do,...
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Donna I understand where this one comes from. You really pack in a lot of emotion here. It written with finesse. That last line really was powerful. John
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The beauty of Minimalism.. I read your gem and immediately in freeze frame a single drop of water suspended in mid air. I find I am the one revolving around it seeing each of your words and the...
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